Showing posts with label criticism. Show all posts
Showing posts with label criticism. Show all posts

Tuesday, December 17, 2019

The page of gathering places



Chin jutted level with the horizon line,
arms clasped around thin elbows which palms
cradle against the abdomen, the body becomes
a sensual veil, loosens its threads, the carpet of moss
appreciates the spaces across smooth rocks such as
She-

And I hear her voluptuous sigh
giving weight to attraction,
attention and focus upon
the tiniest moon
as though the stars were an entourage
of criticism-

She begins again, stainless in the mud,
I inquire as to what is bothering her,
what matters more than
rocks and trees-

She beheld a single sheet of white paper
which explained her glow,
scratch that she noted and tore
it into thin strips
but would not say another word edgewise.

I knew I would piece it all back together
when she smiled, opened her shoulders,
spread her wings and sang
like a mocking-bird.

There were too many notes, index cards
and pages coming back, 
returned to sender and un-
deliverable-

Yet we agreed
on something so stark
standing on different patches
of land and future, undoubtedly
paper was better than plastic.


Painting by Poul Friis Nybo (1869-1929), 'Reading Woman' c. 1929 in Public Domain. 

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